Firestar X Spottedleaf Redone

This picture redone:[link]


Alright so this is how its gonna go, >I3
I'm going to redo every single one of those drawings I did and they will NOT be moved to the scraps until I DO redo them :'D

I'm only doing that because I want that s*** out of my gallery soon so that'll make me do it quicker, and it gives me a self goal so its all good :T

Anyways, changes?
I kept Spottedleaf's ghost in the corner out of the shot only because I don't care for that cliche usage :I
And Spottedleaf isn't crying in death anymore

Firestar no longer looks constipated. And actually I was trying to fit more with the scene in the book while still keeping them alone.
In the book it was more like silent pain rather than screaming out whining pain.

The rain actually LOOKS like its pouring now instead of tick tacks flying out of the sky :U And Spottedleaf's design actually looks SOMEWHAT presentable.

Thar

Otay that's about it, hope y'all like it~

Firestar and Spottedleaf belong to the Erin's